A real world example

On November 27, 2009, Black Friday here in the United States, the New York Times posted this article online and in print titled Buying, Selling and Twittering All the Way .

When it''s time to look for an innovative way to make money from home, Clickbank is a popular choice It''s been around for years, and has built millionaires by allowing them to sell other people''s products

Once upon a time, I had some time on my hand and started a little "tech support" group on a website I belong to called Woman Owned. Woman Owned was there to help women network and grow their businesses. As a part of that mission Woman Owned allowed it's members to specialty create groups that other members could join.

A short list of tips to help you improve your web copy:

1) Write for the web - humans don't 'read' a page. They scan the page jumping around to eye catching points. Three seconds is about all you've got!